Storm Rising by Mercedes Lackey #ReadingValdemar

Storm Rising is the middle book Mercedes Lackey’s THE MAGE STORMS trilogy. We left off with the teen-age boy Karal from Karse in Valdemar to serve as secretary to his master, an envoy of Karse. Although a large alliance is going well among Valdemar and several nations, an assassin manages himself into the castle and murders a couple of them, including Karal’s master. Now he’s the envoy to Karse, but no one takes him seriously. But people from all nations will need to work together to solve the mystery of these “waves” that wash over the entire world, disrupting land, mutating animals into monsters, and destroying all magic spells.

Lackey jumps among three main points of view: Karal; An’desha, whose body had been inhabited by the evil mage Mornelithe Falconsbane; and Grand Duke Tremane, who is vying to inherit the throne of the Eastern Empire by proving he can take over part of neighbor-nation Hardorn. While the results of each “wave” and the source of the problem kept me reading in Storm Warning, it was the challenges each of these three characters faced that affected my reading most in Storm Rising.

Karal’s problem is one familiar to young people today: without older age, he is not listened to. He’s too young-looking to garner support, and he’s surrounded by suspicion, as Karse used to be the sworn enemy of Valdemar. I’m reminded of the student activists from Florida fighting for gun control after their school was shot up — those young people spoke up, organized, and acted. Karal is the same way, or he wants to be, and tries. He creates alliances and connections between variant groups in Valdemar, but overall is under attack (sometimes physically) by other envoys and members of the court. Anxiety eats at his health, another familiar connection that made Karal more relatable than any other Lackey character I’ve read.

An’desha feels himself becoming, in the true bildungsroman sense of the word, and the awkward romantic and sexual relationship he developed with Firesong right after An’desha got his body back from Mornelithe Falconsbane, a relationship that honestly sicked me and felt inappropriate of Lackey to write, is falling apart. Firesong is used to being catered to, worshiped, chased by potential sexual partners — and An’desha is doing none of that now that he’s developing his independence with friends, projects to destroy the effects of the “waves,” and getting more magic education NOT from Firesong. Without a desire to be Firesong’s pet, how will the couple survive? Lackey creates a toxic relationship that suffers from misunderstanding and lack of communication, and I felt the realness of this, too.

Grand Duke Tremane is the most mediocre-seeming man, but he’s respectable to anyone under his charge, even natives of a town he’s invaded. Organizing various town guilds and his soldiers, Tremane realizes that without magic, and being so far from the Eastern Empire, he’s not hunkering down for one of the worst winters the planet has ever experienced: he’s preparing a new permanent home, one that protects them all against the monsters created out of innocent animals when the “waves” hit. Through his actions, I was won over by Tremane, even though he was the one who ordered the hit that killed the envoys in Storm Warning.

Storm Rising is character-driven compared the plot-driven first novel in this trilogy, and I was happy with that. Each of the three characters’ points of view are developed in an interesting way. Sprinkled among them are a few chapters from Firesong that really worried me (in a good way!). He’s considering how clever it was of Falconsbane to hide in the void when his body died, where he could wait for a suitable new body and kill the spirit of its owner. Not that Firesong would condone such a reprehensible action. . . right? But what if he could live many lifetimes? Would he find someone to love him the way he demands, especially since An’desha seems disinterested? Lackey took a really dark road with Firesong, and my heart was all twisty thinking about it!

The novel ends in a way that reminds me of those old episodes of Captain Planet: everyone’s powers have to combine to defeat the bad situation, and in a way that seems too convenient, but I was okay with that. In fantasy, unless something makes NO sense whatsoever, I tend to roll with it. Magic isn’t real, and while it has to stick to the rules the author develops in her world, there’s nothing that says more information about magic can’t be added later on to present an easy-peasy (lemon-squeezey!) solution.

A great read that dramatically shifted all the main characters and pushed the trilogy in a new direction that I can’t wait to follow in the third book.

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  1. I love that you focused the start of your review on Karal, An’desha, and Tremane. I’m surprised to see that you didn’t think Firesong had a dominate voice in the book, however. I felt like we heard more from him than An’desha over the course of the whole book! And, like you, I was a bit shocked at how toxic their relationship turned. You’d think Lackey could have given them a scene where they had a proper break up, hm? Well, maybe that’s coming in the future.

    I can’t decide if Lackey changed Tremane’s character for Storm Rising, or if he’s just been developing this way since Storm Warning. I feel like Tremane’s humanity opened up a lot more in this book. He is significantly less crafty and cunning. And at first, that bothered me. I didn’t feel like he connected to the man he was in the previous book. But, I let that go eventually since I could connect to him the most. I really hope he has one hell of an ending in the next book. I want to see great things from him!


    • I think you’re right; Firesong had a more dominant voice than An’desha in this book, but because he was a main narrator in the previous book, I lumped it all together. Because their relationship seemed founded on sex and dependence, the fact that they’re drifting apart instead of breaking up didn’t surprise me. Then again, no official break up may mean it’s not over yet. What if they rebuild based on better relationship qualities? #CouplesTherapy

      I felt like Tremane carried over well from Storm Warning, though we see more of his humanity is Storm Rising because he has to create a new life for a ton of people who were soldiers and are now more like his citizens. He’s planning for marriages and long-term trade agreements. AND WHERE THE HECK IS THE KING OF THE EASTERN EMPIRE???? Could he be dead? Could he be the cause of the storms? What is he doing??

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      • I’m with you that it made sense that they are drifting apart – but both of them are the sort of people who tackle things head on; I’m surprised they didn’t confront each other about their relationship problems. Oh, wow – I would love it if Silverfox acted as a couple counselor. That would be amazing. Because Lord knows they need some counseling!

        Melanie, I adore you. He’s not hte KING of the Eastern Empire. He’s the Emperor. XD I literally laughed aloud reading this. Charliss isn’t that interesting a character to me. He had one really interesting chapter and vanished from the series. We’re merely told about all this intrigue and scheming. The closest we get to seeing it is when the former spies come together and let Tremane know they aren’t spying any longer. Which makes sense, but was super weird. At this point. Charliss could be dead and I wouldn’t care less. Oops.


  2. It seems like this has taken an upward turn compared to some of the recent Lackey books, which is good. It’s interesting that the convenience of the solution didn’t bother you – when I’m reading fantasy, I always want the authors to put in *more* rather than *less* work to make sure the solution feels earnt, because it’s so easy to handwave it as “oh, magic”.


    • To my reading, the magic still followed all the rules of the universe as they are now, so that’s why I let it slide. I think that in fantasy a lot of times characters become little cardboard cut outs walking around and doing trope things that I appreciated the realism in the characters this time around. This morning I saw a news special about a Swedish girl who is an activist for climate change. She’s so involved that she’s been nominated for a Nobel Peace Prize and has her own Wikipedia page:

      When I saw her in the news this morning, it reminded me again of Karal and how the older members of the court think he can’t do anything because of his age.

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