The Summer She Was Under Water by Jen Michalski
published by Queen’s Ferry Press August 2016
*Disclaimer: I’ve known Jen for a number of years and consider her a friend. We’ve worked on a book tour together for her short story collection From Here; I used to write book reviews for her e-zine, JMWW; and one of my first stories ever published, “Hanged Cat,” appeared in JMWW. Therefore, I know I am terribly biased, but will be as honest as possible! Please check out Jen’s newest book available in both paperback and for Kindle!
As Jen Michalski shared in her most recent Meet the Writer feature, The Summer She Was Under Water was two novels that got woven into one. The main story is about Samantha Pinski. We quickly learn that her father, Karl Pinski, a heavy drinker and mentally unstable, was a violent man. The family learned to placate the monster that is Karl. That is, except Sam’s brother, Steve, who felt he was Sam’s protector, pinning his father down during violent episodes.
But now Sam is 33 years old, has a book published, teaches writing at Hopkins. Her book, which is woven into the main story, is about a man who is pregnant. By page 8, readers are told Sam’s book is actually about Steve. Though she sounds like a success story, her past won’t let her go. And now Sam is going to the Pinski family cabin for the Fourth of July weekend. She’s bringing her new friend Eve as a sort of buffer. Steve, who has been absent for years, may or may not come. Sam can mostly escape her family in her world of academia, but she’s alone and tends to destroy relationships before they destroy her.
Readers learn that Sam has recently broken off a two-year relationship with a man from a wealthy family, Michael. Karl Pinski is now heavily medicated and sober, so he’s like a deflated balloon of his former self. The entire story takes place Friday through Sunday, Fourth of July weekend, though we also get flashbacks to explain complicated relationships, in addition to chapters from Sam’s book.
Readers are taught to like Steve when he finally shows up that weekend. We align with him when we learn in a flashback that Steve took the blame for binoculars Sam lost in the lake when they were kids, which led to his father beating Steve during a family BBQ instead of Sam. Yet, Sam doesn’t know if she wants Steve to come to the cabin, so we know something happened that caused her to hate her brother. But what?
Then Michael shows up — yes, the Michael with whom Sam just broke up — because he was invited by Sam’s mom, Pat Pinski. Sam thinks of Pat as a sort of Shakespeare of romance, trying to arrange staunch individuals into couples. Michael’s into craft beer and soccer (totally unAmerican) and crosses his legs in such a way that suggests he’s effeminate. What did Sam see in him?
Steve quickly suggests Sam, Michael, Eve, and he go out in the boat so he can pull them behind on inner tubes. Michael is goaded into taking a turn, and Steve does his best to fling Michael off in an effort to humiliate the “rich boy.” Really, you’ll want Michael to fly off because you’re rooting for the protective big brother at this point, not the unwelcome ex.
But Michalski expertly takes readers back in time to when Michael and Sam were dating and he first met her family at Thanksgiving. The uneducated Pinskis embarrass Sam, but she feels safe there with Michael. When Steve shows up — late and drunk — he starts to make remarks about Michael not being “vetted” into the family yet, so Michael can’t take over protecting Sam. Michael defends her, saying Sam is a capable woman. Steve won’t listen to some new guy:
I’ve known Sam a hell of a lot longer than you, buddy, better than you ever will. She don’t need no fucking preppy wallet to come in and be all high and mighty to her family.”
Where does Steve’s possessiveness come from? We see time and again the suggestion that Steve won’t let another man care for his little sister. At 35, Steve seems too old to be such a bully. As a result of taking readers back in time to show Michael is a supportive man, my opinions swapped. I realized that I had been tricked into distrusting the outsider with money and different tastes. Once I understood Michael isn’t a stereotype, I became a more attentive reader and suspicious of Steve.
Some parts of The Summer She Was Under Water are familiar: rich vs working-class families, an abusive father whose children turn into damaged adults, an overly-protective big brother, a mother who will always “stand by her man.” But the beauty of the novel is learning how it all really fits together. Why is Sam so miserable? Why did she break up with Michael? Why won’t Steve come home for years at a time? I thought I knew exactly what happened in the past based on contextual clues, but I was wrong. It’s much more complicated.
Eve, the “relatively new friend” Sam brought along for the weekend, is an interesting outsider at the Pinski cabin. She has a ragged past more like Steve’s, so she relates to him, which is meant to make readers relate to him and see Steve through eyes unclouded. Then, Sam starts to worry that her friend and brother are attracted to each other. Meanwhile, the narrative implies Sam herself may be attracted to Eve when we’re given flashbacks of Sam’s and Eve’s developing relationship. Michalski easily works in fluidity: lesbian, bi, straight, male, female, both.
I did wish that Eve and Steve’s names weren’t so similar. I can’t imagine these names were chosen accidentally — “eve” is a component of “Steve,” right? But for that very reason, my eyes would fill in “Eve” to be “Steve,” and vice versa, when I read. I wondered if Michalski actually changed her characters names a few times to get them just right. In a few places the wrong person is named (surely an error in editing), such as confusing Michael for Steve, and Carol (an aunt) for Pat Pinski. Although I hesitated and pieced together what the sentence meant to say, these errors are few and didn’t hurt my enjoyment of the story.
Don’t forget that there is a book within this book, too. The book Sam wrote has its own chapters written in italics. We meet a man who discovers he’s pregnant and wants to kill the baby. Then, a strange woman comes to help him prepare for the birth. The tone of Sam’s book is different from Michalski’s, which is a delight, as it wouldn’t make sense if Sam’s and Michalski’s voices were similar.
In a couple of places the chapters from Sam’s book are really far apart (about 60 pages), which could make it difficult to remember what was happening. I would flip back and re-read the last page of one of Sam’s chapters and then pick up at the next. Had Sam’s chapters been more evenly placed, the story of the pregnant man would be more familiar. It’s easy to flip around in the paperback version, though Kindle readers may have a more difficult time.
I do highly recommend this book, my friendship with Jen aside. Even now, I want to know what happens to Michael and Sam, to Eve and Steve, to Steve and Sam. Whose relationships strengthened, and whose died after that Fourth of July weekend? I keep thinking about them. The Summer She Was Under Water is an emotional giant.
*You can read an excerpt of the novel at The Nervous Breakdown!
I like books that are able to trick us into thinking one thing when really it’s another! Nice review!
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Thanks so much, Naomi! Michalski really keeps readers from deciding who the “good guys” and “bad guys” are when in a novel that has some familiar territory (domestic abuse, an academic in a family of the uneducated, etc.)
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It’s tricky to achieve that effect of making the reader not quite know whose side to be on – sounds like it’s done well in this one!
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I still think you would really like Jen’s magical realism/war novel, The Tide King.
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🙂 Excellent review, I think you managed to be honest even though she was your friend…. and we know how hard it can be! I struggle even if the author has mentioned me on Twitter! haha
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I have a lot of faith in Jen’s writing, so I never expect to writing anything “bad,” per se. I also figure that mentioning any hesitations I have will help increase the credibility of my review and perhaps make people want to read the book. Jen and I may be arranging a giveaway at Grab the Lapels for this book, so keep your eyes peeled!
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Yay 😎 I will!
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Very good review. I think it’s quite a feat for an author can turn the table on the readers in a convincing way. I’m really interested to know if Sam’s story draws parallels to her real life story.
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On the author’s real life? Based on everything I know of Jen, probably not. He first novel seemed to draw nothing from her life either. From what I’ve read in interviews, it’s more like she gets an idea after she hears or sees something and runs with it/explores it, which I think is really cool.
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Oh no, I meant the story about the pregnant man and Sam’s story. Sorry I wasn’t clear, whoops.
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Oh! Yes, the pregnant man is meant to be Sam’s brother, Steve. Readers learn more about why as both stories develop.
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Interesting to learn that this was two stories blended into one ultimately. I suspect many authors find they don’t have enough in one story for a novel but the theme might be similar to another story and could be combined
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When I think of all the scraps of this and that I have written, I’m sure I could use tape and make it into four books! I’m not a talented writer like Jen, though; I get easily distracted and thus cling to my scraps and add to the scrap pile instead of creating something whole.
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This sounds really intriguing!
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When I’m reading complicated books I frequently forget who is who and rely on the context to bring me back up to speed. I suspect I may have ‘lost the plot’ completely in this one.
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Nah, I don’t think it’s that complicated. All the chapters that are from Sam’s book are in italics, so they’re easy to see. You could even read all of Sam’s chapters in one sitting and skip the other part of the book because Sam’s chapters are part of a continuous narrative.
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A book within a book? Bookception! You’ve sure made a great case for The Summer She Was Under Water. It sounds fascinating. Though, I would be bothered by the wrong character names being used! This has happened in other books I’ve read and initially I assume I’m the one who’s misunderstanding something. But if it happens more than once, I stop blaming myself and might judge the editing of the book a little. :}
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I saw three examples total, but I felt it worth mentioning in case someone reads the book and then decides it’s “poorly written” but I was unable to acknowledge as much because I’m friends with Jen.
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Wonderful review! Sounds like an interesting read. I’ll definitely be checking it out. And it’s really great you can give an honest review of the book, although you’re friends with the author. That really means a lot!!
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Thank you so much! I have too much respect for Jen to be dishonest.
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That’s awesome. Not everyone is like that, so that’s a quality I can definitely respect. 😊
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Great review. I can imagine how difficult it would be to review a book written by my friend. I get scared when I review books by authors that I have interacted with before but I really like how honest and well-balanced this review is. The book does sound intriguing with so many interesting books but the part that I like the most is the book within a book aspect. I love books that feature books in any ways and any books that have authors appeal to me also. I will definitely look for a copy of this.
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Thanks for visiting, Diana! Someone referred to Michalski’s novel as Bookception, like the movie Inception ☺
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I’m really intrigued by this book, and by The Tide King too. I had a moment reading your review when I really felt for the protagonist having her ex turn up to a family holiday. I like that you say Michael isn’t the stereotypical rich asshat, too. Good job reviewing a friend’s book (After nearly ten years of workshops, I still get nervous even giving notes on a draft)!
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I think I got workshop fatigue after my MFA. Not everyone is trained to give the right kind of feedback.
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Excellent review…makes me go and grab the book right now…
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